“Defiantly meh” – Virgin & Other Stories by April Ayers Lawson

"There's a sentence on page 158 that goes on for two pages and you don't need me to tell you it would be vastly improved by full stops. It gives the writing the breathless quality of a bore. We've all met them haven't we? People who love the sound of their own voice and can't help but tell you, darling, about all of the adventures they've had, the people they've met, the things they've almost done, the wild times, oh my goodness, how wild those times were..."

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